Struggling to win over investors, attract top-tier talent, or close deals? Your tech might not be the problem.
After fielding 5,000+ startup pitches as journalists / media, and guiding over 500+ startups in refining their brand funnels, we've seen a recurring pattern at Ellerton & Co. Public Relations: when growth stalls, it's rarely a feature gap. It's a trust gap.
1. Sell the Result, Not the Recipe. Nothing kills appetite like a tour of the sausage factory. Focus your message on the delicious meal they'll enjoy.
2. Conduct Quarterly Story Audits. Your brand narrative needs to be a constant across every platform, every pitch, and every sales call. Revisit it quarterly to ensure consistency.
3. Own an Emotion. What do you want people to feel when they interact with your brand? For Harley Davidson, it’s freedom. For Coca-Cola, it’s happiness. Define your core emotion. Is it security? Excitement? Relief? Define it and build from there.
4. The Power of "No." Clearly stating what you don't do is a sign of confidence and focus. It tells the world you're an expert, not a generalist. After all, a jack of all trades might just be a master of none.
5. Make One Unforgettable Promise. What is the single, bold commitment that only you can make to your customers?
6. Let Your Users Write Your Copy. The most persuasive language often comes directly from the people who use and love your product. Are you listening?
7. Translate Features into Value. Don't just sell what your product does. Sell how it makes someone’s job easier, better, or more meaningful.
8. Apply the "So What?" Test. Read your last marketing email. After each sentence, ask, "So what?" If there's no compelling answer, it's noise.
9. Lead with Proof. Don't just tell people you're great. Show them the numbers. Quantifiable impact is the ultimate credibility booster.
10. Ditch the Jargon. "AI-powered," "disruptive," "synergistic." These words are so overused they've become invisible. Speak like a human.
Here's the hard truth many founders learn too late: if you're getting clicks but no conversions, the issue isn't your product. It's your message.
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